Once
Upon A Fairytale Princess
By
Adrianna Morgan
Adrianna Morgan was born in the Bahamas. Of
both West Indian and African ancestry, she was exposed to the shadowy world of
the supernatural at a young age. She was blessed with a mother that knew the
importance of a good ghost story making her fascinated by anything that goes
bump in the night. Adrianna is obsessed with werewolves, vampires and demons,
oh my! A Marine Biology teacher by day, she is still intrigued by the weird and
the unusual. Currently, she has 10 books on Amazon and has challenged herself
to write one full novel per month this year, although she admits she is ready
to throw in the towel. Almost. Adrianna
writes Urban Fantasy, Erotica and Romance. Visit her at http://adriannamorgan.com
for more of her books.
Genre
- Fantasy/ Historical Romance
Release
Date - August 28, 2012
Publisher
– Self Published
In a matter of moments, Ella Fitzpatrick’s
life went from bad to worse. Her father’s boast pits her against every
seamstress in the village all vying for the ultimate prize—guest of honor at
the Prince’s ball. Once there, Ella catches the eye of the charming prince and
manages to make a powerful enemy; one who is not above using magic to aid her
quest. Now Ella is on the run, chasing the very villain who killed her mother
ten years ago and who may be trying to kill her now. The only thing stopping
Ella is her lack of knowledge about her own magical background—and Hunter, the
Prince’s brooding bodyguard. Hunter Kirk has been in love with Ella since she
promised to marry him when they were children. Now she is pledged to his Prince
and someone might be trying to kill her. He has to get to her before the last
Fitzpatrick sorceress is killed—and he loses his chance to tell her how much he
loves her.
Guest Post:
Most Common
Mistakes in Fantasy Writing
Writing has become a new norm and a goal
for almost every high school and college graduate. Many readers are certain they could write a
novel better than the author. And they
probably could, if they had the time.
Some embark upon the task of writing; sitting in coffee shops and
bookstores all over the world to churn out the next bestseller.
As great as that novel may be, one
of the most common mistakes made in Fantasy writing is modeling your book too closely after your favorite read. After “Harry Potter,” there were tons of books
featuring ‘magical British children’.
Some were great, others were a dismal failure. Similarly, after “Twilight,” there was a rash
of twilight-esque books. It became
something of a joke to read which new book, especially Indie, was actually fan
fiction and could be relegated to the slush pile. My e-reader was chock full of knock-offs and
although some were written very well, I could only take so much of vampiric
‘teenagers’ driving expensive cars and falling in love with the high school
outcast, or depressed new girl.
Find
some way to make your novel stand out.
If you like vampire and werewolves, great! But produce something which is not a
replica. My “Blue Moon” Trilogy is
about—you guessed it! Werewolves! But, as one reviewer put it, “it was a twist
on how I became a werewolf.” It’s not
easy to keep your story completely original when you are writing in the same
genre which you are a fan of, and it is easy to reference your favorite tomes. However, keep in mind, those references can
date your book. If you wrote a book and
ten years from now someone is reading it, are there any references which might
date your story? Beyonce Knowles
supposedly once said that if she could change anything about her music, it
would be the references in some songs to companies which no longer exist.
Cliffhangers. There is a difference between a series and a
serial. A serial has cliffhangers and
keeps you on edge for the next episode.
A series had a plot which is tied up at the end of the novel but there
is still some part of the story which remains unanswered for the next book, but
for the most part, the problem is solved.
I learned about cliffhangers the hard way. In my first series, book one ended with a
cliffhanger. Reviewers did not like
that. I was told, “great book, but…” so
many times I wanted to scream. It
brought down ratings for what I thought was an excellent book (I might be a bit
biased) but it taught me a valuable lesson in how to end my books.
Your
fantasy world should make sense.
Yes, you want to have fantastic creatures and weave this intricate
world, but be careful. You could spend
so much time describing this world that the plot of the story gets lost to
it. I recently read a book where the
author used about ten pages talking about the exotic world the main character
was experiencing. By the time she got
back to the dialogue, I had already forgotten what the main character was even
talking about. And I did not want to go
back to find out! Take the movie
“Avatar.” With the exception of the
characters being blue and a few other quirks, the planet itself was not that
different from our own; trees, birds, water, and the characters were similar to
what I watch on National Geographic every Sunday of indigenous people. Keep it simple and realistic.
Don’t lose yourself when writing
your novel and try to become someone else.
You don’t have to use big words all the time and you don’t have to be a
comedian. Simply write the book you
would want to read—and others will want to read it too.
Thank you for hosting today.
ReplyDeleteGreat post and good words of advice.
ReplyDeleteRebecca - Pit Crew
Hmmm too many same old, same old formula where authors try to copy the success of another, so agree with you there.
ReplyDeleteLouise - Pit Crew chef.
Great advice! Thanks for sharing:O)
ReplyDeleteMichelle-Pit Crew